Out of Place Part 1

Hey everyone! This is a new set up I'm trying in order to tell the story that's supposed to happen at Asteria, since it allows me to get through a lot of dialogue and events without having to spend ages making sure that the landscape is well set up so someone can imagine how it looks. Overall, I think this is an okay first try, but the dialogue itself is a bit static. Also, I unfortunately botched up the scan a bit and now it's got a sort of bluish tint to it that I hadn't expected.

None of the less, I did enjoy this exercise, and I am already working on the next page. Tell me what you guys think!